lyrical_sunshine

I wish I had time. It would be so useful, but I'm working two jobs on top of AP classes in school. I am swamped.

"I have a dog named Bernie. He belonged to the firehouse where my dad worked, before...well...you know." ~Marc "My brother has a hamster. Other than that, no. My dad doesn't ...

Let me just say that this year in Newspaper is going much, much better. I'm also planning on running for Editor in Chief for next year. Best of luck. I'm ...

So, i really loved the way you made a completely ordinary, every day thing into a really funny story! This was great! you are a little comma-happy though. I tried ...

9/10. it makes me chuckle. and Dynamo - your sig has been spying on me and my friends. if it were a "your mom" joke then i would have to ...

If you're going to have a drawn out beginning, use it for developing your characters. and i don't mean, "This is Jack. Jake is 15. He lives with his mother ...

Marc: Killer whale. Jake: Dragon Nessie: Cat Kylee: Otter Dax: Lion What's your favorite place in the world?

wow, they have Scooby Doo in Raven's world? I didn't know that... Well, she's from London originally, and she got through into the "paralell" type fantasy world that mirrors this ...

ooh, very cool, very cool. no, that first paragraph is the first paragraph of a novel i started a long time ago and hvae not worked on in ages. mostly ...

Choice 1: Choice 2: Choice 3: Choice 4: Choice 5: Choice 6: Choice 7: Ready...set...vote! :D

sorry! lol. to get back to the ACTUAL game...um...i have a friend who looks like a younger Kirsten Dunst but with a little bit bigger nose. (OMG that sounds horrible...i ...

dang it...you PMed me a while back and i never wrote back! *smacks forehead repeatedly* I'm a jerk! I'm so sorry! Nice to meet you and I hope you're having ...

lol, yes...interesting...i don't know if "interesting" quite covers it. "insane" is the word most people use.

First off, I don't know if you read this in the rules or not, but you're generally not encouraged to preface your own work. You're new, so it's really not ...

Wow, awesome, awesome piece! It's so original and so full of...uh...color! lol. Really, the imagery is beautiful. But I did find some things that confused me or just misplaced commas ...