lyrical_sunshine

6/10 okay...

umm...humanity as a whole just kinda needs to get their heads on straight. personally, i'm a Christian, and i hate how other Christians sit and talk crap about other people ...

9/10 Twilight-inspired?

5/10 sorry...sorta boring.

hello! wow, you stuttered in a written paragraph! i didn't know that was possible! haha! sorry, that was mean. *is ashamed* really, its very nice to meet you. i'll look ...

Okay...cool. I have a feeling i can't truly appreciate this poem. I'll leave now. *walks away*

Nice. I pretty puch agree with everything Penguin said. some of the rhymes, especially in the second stanza, are a little awkward. The rhythm needs to flow a little more. ...

I really like the last two lines. but this one didn't make sense: "Claiming his sight and stand." what does that mean? how do you claim your stand? like his ...

haha! that's awesome.

ha, i never recycle my ideas. i have one lingering from 3rd grade. they all stay tucked away in the dark recesses of my mind...covered in cobwebs...lonely, abadoned. although i ...

It's got a great message. I don't think you should try so hard to would sound just as good if not better if the rhyming didn't feel forced. That's just ...

Watch your punctuation, you have a lot of run-ons. When you have a compound sentence (two subjects and two verbs in one sentence) use a semicolon or a conjunction to ...

True love! A family! School! More opportunities for Max to be her obnoxious, sarcastic self! THAT is what awaits us in book 4. lol. at least that's my opinion. or ...

haha, i read the Wish List. My favorite part was Satan playing his Gameboy. *ROTFL*

i LOVE A Wrinkle in Time. and I am a Christian who LOVES a Wrinkle in Time. I thought they were wonderful books. they actually strengthened my faith, they didn't ...