lyrical_sunshine

SHOWING NOT TELLING! SHOWING NOT TELLING! SHOWING NOT TELLING!!!! INFINITY!!!! what twit said - don't just say "this happened, then this, then that". SHOW US. other than that, it was ...

This actually sounds like a story I read in 7th grade, but I completely forget what it was called. It was some historical account of... some time period, and a ...

ooh, lots of mystery and intrigue! i like it! post a link soon, ok?

Whew that was a long list! I listen to songs that I think describe my characters really well...and I have a habit of thinking of a character in my story ...

7/10 that's harsh...

*huggles panda bear* 6/10

8/10 it's growing on me. :D

this story is really good. i'm writing something similar that i'm planning on posting soon. i'll edit later when i have more time. i'm in Journalism right now. ;)

they actually strengthened my faith, they didn't really challenge it. Oh, I certainly agree with you. This story doesn't challenge Christianity as much as it does Orthodox rules-->putting other philos

gah! there are so many young, talented writers here that i am beginning to feel very old and very pathetic. *is depressed* this was excellent. i can't critique you because ...

could you change the font? it's a bit hard to read...

*is hopeful* when do we get more?

These are the ones I think I want for my senior quotes: "Security is mostly superstition. Life is either a daring adventure or it is nothing." ~Helen Keller "To grow ...

For me it has to be something upbeat, passionate, and meaningful. Skillet, Linkin Park, TobyMac, Evanescence (very good for "Firebrand"). Worship music. the "Music Inspired by the Chronicles of Narnia

"Wait...why are we talking about religion?" ~Marc "A couple people are desperate for an argument." ~Vanessa *pointlessly* "I go to church sometimes..." ~Jake