lyrical_sunshine

I think you jump into the action a little too fast. we don't know who Ruki is and we don't know who Raven is. We have no reason to care ...

YAY for HP fanfics! Ayra covered pretty much everything i saw. *shrug* but it was good. the characters were really well-developed. i'm confused, though. was Ishtar O'Conner in the books?

"Feeble-minded, my ass. I'm fluent in eight language, thanks very much." ~Marc "Werewolves?" *Vanessa looks interested* "Can't say I've ever met a werewolf before." "Don't feel too left out, Ness. ...

4/10. sorry. i don't get it.

9/10 but i'm confused...

Ok, well, my mom's a psychologist, so i kinda have an idea. Sex and rape are totally different. sex is something God created and married people do; rape is about ...

"True dat." ~Marc.

Marc: "Sure. I like movies. Good way to kill boredom." Jake: "Yeah, whatever." Vanessa: "Yeah, I love movies. I like comedies alot. I'd love to be an actress someday, so ...

I feed my stories to my sister. That is how I test what is good and what isn't. If she'll read it, it's not too bad. If she won't, it ...

Jake: *coolly but obviously uncomfortable* "Defending Marc." Marc: *is thrown into a coughing fit* Do you like rain?

yeah...maybe we should start with PMing though. you want to start, or me?

this is really interesting. i never thought too much about who would read my novel - males or females. personally, i've always read a variety of book. i like the ...

"Sarah in Pink and Purple Land." Not even kidding, that was the name of my first story. My aunt helped me write it. We had this game where I would ...

yuck. I want to send those spoiled brats to Africa and have them work with AIDS orphans. spoiled, sexist, meaningless... *walks off muttering*

10/10 SOOOO confusing, but somehow it cracks me up. go figure.