lydia91

The place we lived in smelled musty and damp. The wallpaper, yellowed to parchment, curled up at the corners: it would have been bleached plain, but for the streaks of ...

This made me smile! Cynicism at Xmas is always great... I wonder if there could be more added to the story - I was left wanting to know what happened ...

This really is very good; you have a talent for creating images that remain in the reader's mind long after they have read the line. At first I was put ...