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I'm a bit late, but oh well.... I think this happens to almost all writers...if I'm starting to feel that way, I do a few things: Leave it alone for ...

thanks for the help, everyone, but it's time for this one to be removed

i got confused as what she... or actually where, she actually was. was she standing above a cliff, or just standing in the river? it was kinda rough and jumpy... ...

wow...thanks for that! Glad you liked it so much, I'll definitely keep working at it now :D

Thank you everybody for all of your help. I really appreciate the good feedback. But since I'm planning to send this one off, I've got to get it off the ...

I've often heard of writers who have to many words in their work, and have to tone it down in order to submit. I have the complete opposite problem, however. ...

Wow, thanks! There was a lot of valuable advice in there, especially the part whole "You were just a little girl" thing, which I will change IMMEDIATELY, because cliché and ...

Here's the thing: I have finished my novel (FINALLY), and right now I am editting, but there's this one part that is extremely corny/cheesy...maybe not so much the writting, but ...

Wow, thank you everyone! I was starting to give up on ever getting sugguestions XD I really, really appreciate all your help, and I will take everything into accounts. Thanks ...

Apologies for the bump but I just wanted to say that any comments are welcome. I will be satisfied even with a "This Sucks", if it really does. I'm not ...

I enjoyed this, except one part did confuse me a little...I think someone else might have said it already but I'm not sure: "The girl sighed, rolling her steel grey ...

I'm a notebook and pencil kinda earlier writing days were filled with lost loose-leaf and half-finished word documents, so my way is the best for me XD. plus it just ...

Just have a chuckle and think of all the fantasy stories you've read that would fail in a second. That was probably the funnest part far none that I read ...

*sniffs* This was a really great read. And very sad/ *sniffs again* Good job!!!

Just the prologue to my almost-finished novel. May seem a bit...rough ^^'. Any comments or sugguestions are welcome and will be of use! And could you see this as an ...