lxtmidnight

Hey! LxTMidnight, here to critique your story. Nuff small-talk, I'll start... First of, I should start by saying that when I read anything, I take a look at the first ...

That was a probably the Best Crit I've got in a while. You didn't have to put up with so much coffee for this...*sniff* (I can't stand the stuff personally, ...

Hee hee...I love that you're in love with an oak tree :lol: Thanks a lot, I'd really appreciate it if you'd review, even if it takes a few years. Here ...

Thanks a bunch for the help! I've started to revise, and hopefully I'll be able to post it soon. Allow me to build up enough points and I'll send you ...

I was not expecting the twist xD The only thing I had to point out has already been said (the DOWN missing from downstairs) Anyways, I loved it :D *stars*

I love these things xD They say I'm a Bad Boy in your pants (Draco and the Malfoys) Teenage Love Affair in your pants (Alicia Keys) I'm Not that Girl ...

(Title is subject to change) Call of the Wind (also known as Almost a Love Story), in short, is about a quiet girl who falls in love with the wind. ...

Jetpack picked up most of the things I was going for, except: I fell to my knees reaching my arms out and holding her. I was careful not to move ...

This looks interesting! I think I'll take a bite: He could almost taste the air, thick with the festival’s smells; cooking meat and the spicy seasoning his region was known ...

Here is my full crit! I don't have Word, so I save everything as RTF files so that they can be opened with Word. But since YWS won't let me ...

Should you keep going? Yes, definitely yes...you've caught my interest. Not only that, but I really like the voice of your character. Just one little thing.... At first father forced ...

Antigone Cadmus picked up on nearly everything I saw, but I'll still give it a shot xD The wind howled, sending items overboard into the billowing black ocean. "Sending" doesn't ...

For the most part, everything's been picked up on. But there two little things (And I really mean little, but maybe not the explanations xD) that really bother me about ...

Era doesn't matter. They can be dead or living, still active or not :D Hmm, I'd cast my MC Sarene as either Claudette Colbert or Anne Hathaway, I can't pick ...

People know I write and people know I love to write but I do not let anyone I know read my writing. I always say "I'll let you read it ...