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Wow, this piece is amazing! You conveyed the emotion in a very compelling way that kept me reading. And I love the way you formatted it as a letter with ...

Nice poem. I like the idea you convey of having an imaginary friend as an escape to the boredom of life. Although I don't actually know you, your perfect in ...

I remember the day fear came knocking at my door It’s the fear of disease and death; of terrorists and war The fear of heights, falling, not being able to ...

This is an interesting poem and I rather like it. However, I didn't understand the beginning or its connection to the rest of the poem. Masks are facades; Lies used ...

I really enjoyed reading this poem. :D It's eloquent and full of great imagery. I especially love the idea you convey. The title summarizes it, but the poem describes it ...

Thanks for your review! :D I was trying to make each stanza 3 lines, but I agree it is confusing. I'm going to change it to make it easier to ...

I used to think this life I lived was enough. My claim to be blameless was surely a bluff. Raised by Christians, this faith I took for granted. As a ...

Thanks for the reviews everyone :D I appreciate your input

This is a very nice poem. I like the vivid imagery and emotion you portray. I wait in there every hour, every minute, every day. Wait with me every hour, ...

I really like this poem alot. It's a good length because it tells you enough but you don't drag it out. I was there when her beautiful dark brown eyes ...

We were young when we met innocent, naïve We knew nothing of pain, of sorrow, or grief Our world was a playground full of life and joy We used to ...

Well I haven't been online in a few days, so I was pleasantly surprised when I saw 6 critiques to my poem. That just made my day. :D So thanks ...

"From the lips of children and infants you have ordained praise because of your enemies, to silence the foe and the avenger." -Psalm 8:2 A child dancing in the moonlight ...

Wow! I like your poem a lot. If you think of the future like a broken piece Waiting to be fixed With time against many a life The enchantment of ...

Wow what a unique story! It was interesting and kept my attention. You did a great job of portraying the innocence and confusion of the narrator as she wondered in ...