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Thanks for the reviews and the formatting help! :D

So I can't figure out how to format this poem so it will show the spaces between my stanzas. Can anyone help me out? I never had a problem with ...

An Ode to Childhood She dances behind her mother, twirling through the grocery store, as she gives pet names to the vegetables, enclosed in her imaginary setting. But the seven-year-old ...

This is a nice poem. I really like the imagery and emotion you portray. What is tomorrow without your love? Some wounds that would not heal Ripped off my body ...

Wow, I like this alot. I opened it to read it because the title drew me in (I took dance classes for 9 years). I was truly impressed by your ...

Wow this is really good. You made it short and to the point, but full of impact. You did a great job of the age old saying "show, don't tell." ...

I like this poem. It is full of vivid imagery and emotion. that danced so preciously with the gift of life from before the wakeful eyes I think adding "the" ...

Well I wrote this for my Mom. I'm giving it to her for her birthday. Let me know what you think. I remember the days of childhood; I remember them ...

Wow I love this! I can totally relate, and you captured so much raw emotion that I felt like I was there again. I love your use of questions that ...

I like this poem. Change is such an important idea that applies to all of life and I think you wrote about the subject well. The only thing I found ...

Thanks everyone for your comments! And yes, the spacing is messed up. When I first posted it the spaces were still there, so I'm not sure why they disppeared now. ...

There’s a little boy sitting on the street with nothing to hold but his sorrows. He has no food to eat and his clothes are tattered; he has no family, ...

I love this poem; it's sweet and elegant. Your use of imagery and metaphors is amazing. The true nature of a star Is to give hope, isn’t it? The shine ...

I like this poem. It is dramatic and gripping. Replacement: un-satisfaction Regret, Disgust Lingering, Wallowing Waiting for it to ware off "un-satisfaction" should be "unsatisfaction" with no dash. A

When you look into the mirror, what do you find? Are you angry at God for the way you’re designed? You see acne, crooked teeth, and messed up hair Body ...