lunahlove

For two points, I would have to defend myself (even if i failed to make it clear - my bad!) The newspaper: The question mark is a valid addition. It ...

Do you mean make my paragraphs longer?

True, but I'm arguing in advance, so that when the time comes it gets the classification it deserves.

Thanks so much for reviewing that

Sorry about that xD I've got part 5 up c: I definitely need to expand on everything; I didn't even really consider what Leander told Kalliope. That was a fail ...

Thanks so much for reading! I'll go through and fix those mistakes later today :) That was ridiculously helpful ♥

Thanks so much for the review

Fersirius dude, wouldn't they? The best I came up with was this, which was all of a single line in the story: "I won’t tell anyone you’ve broken at least ...

I think that might be a little too sophisticated for this time period, at least among the common class. :P but something almostas fast as that, at least, is where ...

Completely under wraps :) most of the government doesn't even know they exist; only the scientists workin on the project and the top dogs

Nah, Hero's supposed to be more modern. She oughta know better. For shame. XD microwhat. oh god. mind blown by whatever that is. :'D TO GOOGLE. All right, I'll go ...

That's a good idea :) It's boring to have her in one mood the entire time, just going 'ohshitohshitohshit', and it's slightly uncharacteristic of her - she'd be pissed and ...

Thankiesthankiesthankies! I kinda wondered about that when I wrote it. I was like 'email? hmmm' but as usual, I was too lazy to think of something better -___- lemme run ...

OHSHITOHSHIT I THOUGHT I ADDRESSED THAT must have been in the drafts. yeah, it was a weak premises, so my reasoning in the draft when something like this hero: you ...

Thanks midnightread! It does have a rating if I'm not mistaken @.@ what sort of mistakes are you referring to? Thanks for taking the time to read!