lunahlove

There seemed some parts of the poem that could use a little bit of editing. I noticed there isn't any punctuation - is the poem meant to be read in ...

For two points, I would have to defend myself (even if i failed to make it clear - my bad!) The newspaper: The question mark is a valid addition. It ...

Do you mean make my paragraphs longer?

I was enthralled with the book. If there's anything I've learned from other quality fantasy novels (read: Harry Potter) it's that the best "battle" scenes have lots of violence, and ...

So I've never tried steampunk before, and I need some serious help. Much to my chagrin, the due date for this short story was set much earlier than I had ...

1740 and still need to work

While the metric system is indeed distinctly more useful, as several people have pointed out, it would be an immense pain where the sun don't shine. On the point of ...

True, but I'm arguing in advance, so that when the time comes it gets the classification it deserves.

Thanks so much for reviewing that

My only suggestion is that doesn't belong on a white shirt. That belongs on something perhaps dark green or black. White seems too ordinary for something that awesome On the ...

I wrote this essay for a writing class I took this year. It is modeled (as the assignment required) loosely on Plato's The Apology . There are some sentences that ...

Sorry about that xD I've got part 5 up c: I definitely need to expand on everything; I didn't even really consider what Leander told Kalliope. That was a fail ...

Final part of the story. To reiterate: part 4 + 5 were all written between 11 pm-2am, and 5am-6am the day it was due, so a lot of things will ...

This is part 4 of my story! I have everything finished, thanks to a speed-writing session I needed to do to turn it in as a final, but I'm going ...

Thanks so much for reading! I'll go through and fix those mistakes later today :) That was ridiculously helpful ♥