luna_the_shiekah

I figure I won't bother with a critique since everyone else has beaten me to it and I fear I will only enforce what everyone else has already said. But ...

It's my job.-Warrior. When I'm off flirting and partying. Gotta seduce that wealthy up and coming executive somehow.-Ai I dont know how.-Jyace I never bothered. Not that it would matter. ...

Lose Control by Evanescence- Warrior Buttons by The Pussycat Dolls- Ai I don't have one...-Deelia What is your favorite food?

Welcome! I haven't been here very long myself. (Barely two days) But I'm having a lot of fun. And I even got a nice critique of my story ^_^ People ...

I love the Sims. I have Sims 2 and all the expansions up to Open For Business. Not to mention all the custom content I've downloaded from If you want ...

I'm far too lazy to critique this simply because I find it extraordinary! So instead, I'll just comment on what I liked. The dialogue was believable and as Cassandra said, ...

My sword- Warrior I don't need a weapon. I am the weapon- Deelia. Are you more of an offense person, defense, or stealth?

Well, before I start my critique, I'd like to say that I was a bit apprehensive of the story at first, but upon finishing this first chapter, I thoroughly enjoyed ...

Yes. When they've done something to you first.- Warrior I have to agree with the green haired girl.-Deelia How do you know my hair color if your blind?!- Warrior Oh, ...

Because every memory I have worth remembering is on my body as a scar- Warrior I have no idea. I can't remember anything past waking up in the aftermath of ...

I have yet to actually read her vampire work. Despite the fact I've been on a vampire binge the past month book wise. Maybe I'm inadvertantly rebelling? Just kidding, it's ...

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Twice- Warrior I've died once! Well no wait, technically I died twice. Let's see...first that demon killed me and then Sakura shot me so I could go upstairs and sort ...

A red balloon came drifting by, floating free through the saphire sky. The chickadees chirp, The turtledoves croon, "Where are you off to, red balloon?" I love that verse, simply ...

" I dub thee Peter." Is by far my favorite line. I enjoyed it. And if it wasn't for the fact that I have to leave very shortly, I'd give ...