luna_the_shiekah

This was a free write assignment for my creative writing class. I just want to see how much this little foray into fairy tales will be torn apart or appreciated. ...

Granted but now you're awful in History. I wish my glasses weren't crooked.

I like the way the wind hits my face.- Red Of course not! It ruins my hair!- Ruth Do you like pumpkin soup?

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I found it to be a thoroughly enjoyable read. Of course, there are the few typos here and there but I'm sure everyone whose posted previous to me already pointed ...

Opposite of me? Um...I'm not sure. Lydia what do you think?- Asenath Intelligence obviously and experience.- Lydia So, you're saying I'm stupid? *Wide eyes*- Asenath. Ah-oh hell. Look, Ruth is ...

Granted but now you don't understand english. I wish I didn't have to do my book report.

Granted, but its full of famine and corruption. I wish my stuffy nose would go away.

Granted, you have a wonderful Christmas but an awful New Years Eve. I wish I had some lotion

Granted. However, it becomes one of the most controversial stories in history and is banned from most libraries and bookstores. I wish my fingernails would grow faster.

Not at the moment. But I probably will if I stay cramped up in this kitchen any longer...- Della No, robots do not suffer from muscle ailments. Jebdah How often ...

Granted but by some strange turn of events, they grow back and you must endure all over again. I wish I didn't need glasses.

Mistress Luna I'd appreciate it if you were to abide my owner's wishes and flesh out our story. She really wants you to make our tale better and longer. Jebdah ...

This appears to be the wrong number. My apologies.- Jebdah Della's Answering Machine Della's Bakery, delectable desserts made by aliens for aliens! Leave a message and I or my assistant ...

I really liked it! The rhythm was a bit...off but it seemed to work. At least in my opinion, though do take my crit with a grain of salt, I ...