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Re: In The Picture
"Will you just OPEN THE DOOR?" Mimi panicked and ushered her irate daughter inside. She gave the teen a once over and frowned at the blue hue in her cheeks ...
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Re: Corrupt a Wish
Granted but they too become cliches and you then just spout cliched similes for all eternity. I wish I had a coconut.
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Re: One line Summary
"Um one, why is your puke purple and snot like? And two, since when do I even HAVE any siblings? Am I being punked right now?" What would you do ...
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Re: Corrupt a Wish
Granted but it's a 2 for 1 deal so you have to go as well. I wish my friend could finally sleep.
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Re: The Hanged Man
Interesting take on the effects of Link's shadow being manipulated. That was one of the things I missed from Twilight Princess. Dark Link. Very well written piece. Cuccos for you! ...
Feb 1, 2007 -
Re: The Love of a Porcupine
I thought it was cute. :) I can just imagine a little porcupine nuzzling the ends of a broomstick. He spent all his time with her; happy for her quiet ...
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Re: Character Answer Game
I've sinned more.- Warrior Good deeds ^_^- Asenath Sin is my middle name.- Ruth Do you like french toast?
Feb 1, 2007 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish
Granted but now those in a love that is unrequited may never pull themselves out of it. I wish I had some french toast.
Feb 1, 2007 -
Re: One line Summary
"Um...." *Stares at immense darkness. Points right* "Thattaway." What would you do if you found a large meteorite in your backyard?
Feb 1, 2007 -
Re: In The Picture
Jyace blinked blearily and looked about. The entirety of his surroundings were made up of glass. Crawling over, he tapped the side with his finger and froze as a strange ...
Feb 1, 2007 -
Re: Happy Anniversary
This was a free write for my creative writing class. I decided to twist an old fairy tale again like I had with "Beauty & the Beast." It needs a ...
Jan 30, 2007 -
Re: Vampires
Interesting start, though there are quite a few instances where you don't capitalize when you need to. Just tighten that up and I think you'll have a good tale on ...
Jan 30, 2007 -
Re: One line Summary
*Screams* OMG! I-*Pause* Oh you're so cute! *Nuzzles and pets. Five minutes later* Erm...can you change back now? It's your birthday but no one is available to help you celebrate, ...
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Re: Title Feedback
Sounds Italian and when I read it, my mind makes it sound like it's being said in a high-pitches nasal voice. Annoying really. A Wicked Game
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Re: Brad Returns with Better Artwork (and more shame!)
Hell, what aren't you good at? Math, poetry. You can even draw! And unless your portrait was drawn to say mask the fact you're hideous, you are apparently attractive as ...
Jan 30, 2007
