luna_the_shiekah

I'm with a few others on this. If I think it's rubbish, I don't critique simply to save myself the pain of rereading it to nitpick on their mistakes. However, ...

Ooooh shiny anime shot. Looks vaguely like Tifa from FF7 but I don't think it's her. 7/10

I wish there were some names in this story and some explanation as to why Cinderella and her prince broke up in the first place. The reaction of her redheaded ...

The school nearly suspended you over something like this? What kind of uptight school do you attend? Okay...done with the rant. I enjoyed this story! And since you posted this ...

7/10 I like the artwork but I'm going to sit here trying to figure out what anime it's from ^^

Teacher: Why didn't you do your homework? Me: I have a high enough grade to skip little assignments like that. It's no big deal. Teacher: *Silent* I do this alot ...

Very nice! This was by far my favorite part: I turned to face her and stopped in shock. She sighed slightly and turned fully to face me. She was the ...

9/10. Mysterious but very pretty. I love the wolf too ^_^

Teacher: Where is your homework? Student: I didn't do it. Teacher: Why? Student: Because Fred is stupid. Teacher: Who? Student: I'm sorry, you were talking? ((This an excuse my friend ...

This piece was delicious and I mean that in every sense. You made everything so wonderfully descriptive, that for lack of creativity on my part, it was like a fine ...

I second theron guard. I assumed the seductress is a succubus yes?

So THIS was the piece you were working on when I was chatting with you! Well, damn. I loved it! The sensuality turned into brutality and horror rather effortlessly, a ...

I liked it! Well, what I could understand of it. Sam has a good point, you really shouldn't bring up so many different terms and objects without explaining what they ...

Other than what the previous commenters mentioned, I don't have anything to critique. Wow. Just wow. This was delightfully dark. The detail of his eating the insulation thinking it was ...

"And then the story ended." C'mon, that'd be pretty lame. Laaaaame.