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Good! I really liked this piece, and you can tell a lot of effort went into it. I liked the idea of looking into what the eagle thinks, that isn't ...

2: Has the US ever recognised habeus corpus for non US citizens? No that's not the problem. If the U.S. declared you a foreign combatant, you wouldn't get a trail, ...

Good poem as to the actual mechanics, you painted a picture, and used good words. However, the problem i have with this poem, is that there is no background. Say ...

why are you looking in here?

Great! It was funny great rhyme's, and finally a poem that isnt depressing! I especially liked the part about bringing Ol' Lucky to the father in law :lol:

I like the a-b-c rhyme scheme, itreally fits in to the "jumble" of instruments theme. The Edgar Allen Poe reference at the end was good.

Don't care what they spend it on, if it keeps them alive ill do it. who cares if half of it go's to drugs when the other keeps some one ...

Double post- sorry

Ok, i have two problems with this. First off, this poem has nothing to with Nazi's/ Holocausts. Just for history check, they did not work things like that. Re title ...

What was that? At least try some proper grammar. This isn't a new version of face book, it's actually about writing, and that was not it.

If you dont know of the story, it basically focuses on some man eating birds, :shock: the movie is by Alfred Hitchcock. There they swoop in the sky, only coming ...

Ok, i can see that you were going for the little "ditty" effect. The problem is, is that if you're going for that, it needs to rhyme. The brevity of ...

I often write works for young writer and then submit them for a similar school assignment and vice versa. Do you consider that plagiarism, or to a lower extent, laziness?

I am totally for electronic books. It's cheaper, more affordable, and more convenient. And it might not be as nostalgic, but it's just as cozy to read an electric book ...

My first suggestion would be to fix your spelling/punctuation mistakes. There are a lot. On to the story, the actual setting and story was good, and i liked your ending. ...