lucyy

This was short & sweet (: I think the length was just right & I already like the sound of this :D To my critiquing: The night outside was full ...

I have now finished reading all twelve chapters :shock: & I have to say I'm glad I devoured them all in one day :D You're writing is just so totally ...

Oooh, I love how you've added more to the story so it isn't just focusing on Isaac and Sophia. Looking forward to find out what happens with The Coven problem ...

That chapter has left me totally breathless .. such raw emotions!! I seriously can't stop reading this ... I'm off to the next chapter. I've never read so much on ...

Wow another great chapter :D & I love the whole "Blood Mate"/"Uniter" thing, so cool & good names as well. I love how you're not rushing into Isaac & Sophia's ...

As I didn't leave a comment on chp 3, I thought I would leave one here, but there's nothing much I can say that I haven't said on the other ...

Wow I'm really enjoying this (I seem to be using these words alot!) I am seriously transfixed, I can't dstop reading the chapters!! You have a page-turner of a story ...

Wow I really like this :D it feels like I'm reading a book that's already been published! & I think that this is unique to Twilight & I'm really loving ...

Wow!! I love this, it leaves me wanting to read more ... & I so wish I could write like you! Its breathtaking .. seriously ... :shock: I'm off to ...

Thanks for PMing me on posting this piece & again I enjoyed it! Here are my critiques, I hope it helps .... The library showed [s]it's[/s] its age This place, ...

Here we go .. hope this helps ... “Patricia…” I began but I think there was hardly any voice that came out. Right, 'hardly any voice' sounds wrong. Try something ...

Wow, I really liked this & am hooked!! I can't think of anything for you to improve it & it slightly confuses me so I start questioning it, which is ...

Thank you, I'm going to edit those mistakes today & I'll add in a bit more scenery & descriptions. Thank you all for your tips & for reading this!! Lucyy ...

Thank you all for your tips & comments. I'm so glad you all liked it & want to read more!! hehe ... unbeleivable (: & thank you daytripper for all ...

Thank you all for reading my chapter & I'm glad you liked it :D & lol sorry about the length, I sometimes get a bit carried away (: & thankyou ...