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Ooh, I have no idea oin which direction this is going in, which is great as I'm already addicted and really want to know what's happening next (: I really ...

Thank you everyone for your critiques, they came in soo helpful in the process of altering this. I hope this is alot better, but critique is still very much welcome!! ...

Oooh, I'm liking the direction this is going in ... can't wait for more!! Although, I am sad that she's made the decision to not be with Isaac :( I ...

Just to let you know I will read & review this, but yet again I'm on a flying visit, so I will hopefully be able to soon (: & I ...

I'm back for the promised review, just one day earlier :wink: So .. here goes ... (: Can You Handle It? ; This confuses me slightly, Is this still part ...

Heyy daytripper -- I thought it was about time I read & reviewed some of your work as you've (very kindly) reviewed alot of mine (: & I saw this ...

I like this poem, again, as I said I'm not a poetry person & I avoid the forums so this won't be a very helpful critique, but anwayss ... I ...

Wow this sounds really good (: I'm not all that good with poetry, but I still like reading it (I just can't wite it!! :lol: ) But this was reallyyy ...

Wow. Again, there is nothing more that can be said, your writing style is totally breathtaking & I'm as addicted to this story as I was to the Twilight series ...

Thank you all for reading this & I totally agree with you all it's way too rushed & needs more emotions!! But I'm glad you have all read this & ...

** I am no longer using YWS but I'd like to say thank you to everyone who commented on my work and helped me to improve it - you guys ...

Having just got back from holiday I'm so overwhelmed at all the comments I've got & I can't thank you all enough for reading my story & critiquing it to ...

Daytripper -- Thank you so much for your help, I will alter those mistakes straightaway (: & thank you so much, I'm so glad you like the story already :D ...

** I am no longer using YWS but I'd like to say thank you to everyone who commented on my work and helped me to improve it - you guys ...

Only a few small alterations I have spotted: “Because you 're the only child, Sophia, “Because your the only child, Sophia, your father is leaving his fortune with you. Except ...