lucyy

Aww, thank you so much ashley :D I'm so glad you like it (: & I'm glad you now understand her reasons for going, as I wasn't too clear on ...

I'm glad this alot better (: yayy (: & thank you daytripper for reading this a second time - you've been soo helpful, so thank you. And I will alter ...

Hi there thatannagirl & welcome to YWS, you will love it here & be totally addicted in no time (: If you have any questions or anything or wish me ...

Wow this was really good, I'm seriously addicted to this ashley, you are such a great writer!! I can't wait for more & thank you for PMing me by the ...

Yayy so pleased thank youuuu (: I worked so hard at the improvement, I'm glad you liked it woop woop, so happy :D & lol i know, i would never ...

Thank you so much ashley, I'm glad you like it yayy so happy :D & thank you so much for reading it and just thank you (i say that too ...

Thank you so much ashleylee for reading my three posts of this, I really appreciate it, they will come in really helpful in the altering process (: But I'll let ...

Thank you for reviewing & critiquing this ashleylee, I will take everything you said on board, when I get back to altering this. & by the way, I just thought ...

Thank you ashleylee for reviewing this - so kind (: & by the way some of the spellings you pointed out, I spell different to you as I'm from England ...

I totally love the idea to this & I so want to read more .. so please PM me when you post any follow-ups to this :D Lucyy xx

This is a seriously great story you got going on here!! It's so addictive, I can't think of any ways in which to improve it at all & your characters ...

Ooh, this story is getting better & better & more addictive .. I'm really enjoying this story!! I love the way you're always letting us know what Sophia's thinking & ...

The ending of this is just great - I love the way you've changed this to two parts a chapter - builds up loads of suspense!! I'm off to read ...

Wow, I love the new improved preface!! You wrote it beautifully & the starting paragraph was just amazing, it drew me in straight away! This preface built up loads of ...

Wow, I love how you ended this, it got me so wanting more :shock: I really enjoyed this & I can't wait for the next chapter!! Can you PM me ...