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Oh *huffs and looks miffed* why did you have to end it like that?? Another awesome chapter ash, but the only thing I hated was how it ended - you're ...

Thank you so much In_the_Moonlight for reading this & I'm soo glad you think my writing's improved :D thank you also for following this story & I totally agree with ...

I nearly forgot, but I here I am for the promised review. I haven't read the above review, so I apologise in advance if some of what I say is ...

Haha, thank you so much :D I'm glad you didn't know she was a vampire until the end, as I had to add in some twist at the end, so ...

Thank you KJ for reading and reviewing this. I'm glad you think my writing's improving (: & I totally agree with you, I don't like this chapter at all, so ...

I have read this daytripper - it's another great chapter, but I only skimmed as I'm on a bit of a flying visit, but I promise on Saturday I'll be ...

Heyy Merry (: Thank you for reviewing this and as for what's going to happen next .. you'll have to read on to find out :wink: & I haven't yet ...

Another great chapter ash *round of applause for the awesome writer* :wink: However, I picked up on a few things that I think you could do to improve ... Length ...

I will try and grab the reader at the start when I alter it .. I may just overdo this chapter as I'm not too pleased with it ... hmm ...

I will do :wink:

Thank you new readers for reading this, I'm always happy to get advice from new people :D chichi -- Thank you sooo much for your really helpful review (: it's ...

grimy89098 -- No worries, thank you for pointing it out and also reading this (: I gave it in to my teacher today, so I will hopefully know what grade ...

That sounds great daytripper - the article was the most thing that I struggled on so I would love for you to help me out on that :D And thanks ...

I would also love to know if my portrayal of America is correct or not. The only time that I've been to America was Disneyland at Florida when I was ...

** I am no longer using YWS but I'd like to say thank you to everyone who commented on my work and helped me to improve it - you guys ...