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Re: A Titleless Story (5)
Thank you all so much for taking your time to read and review this. Your comments are very kind and your thoughts will come in extremely helpful in the editing ...
Oct 29, 2008 -
Re: If Love is not Enough Chapter 2
Here I am for the promised review, but I haven't looked at the review above me, so I apologise in advance if I repeat anything. So, I guess that's it ...
Oct 28, 2008 -
Re: A Titleless Story (5)
** I am no longer using YWS but I'd like to say thank you to everyone who commented on my work and helped me to improve it - you guys ...
Oct 28, 2008 -
Re: The Triangle Effect
Heyy there Teddy :D Welcome to YWS!! And as this is your first story, I have decided to read and review it (: Before we get going, I'll talk you ...
Oct 27, 2008 -
Re: Need a review? Well, I love doing them!
Roll up, roll up, free reviews on offer!! I'm waiting ...
Oct 27, 2008 -
Re: The meeting at the cafe.
4th February, 2008 Dear diary, Emily set me up with a blind date today and guess what??? He was the cutest thing you would ever see. He was charming, sweet, ...
Oct 27, 2008 -
Re: Second from the Left
Here I am for the promised review. Firstly I'll talk you through my critiquing techniques. I will firstly go through the work and point out any grammar, wording etc mistakes ...
Oct 27, 2008 -
Re: If Love is not Enough Chapter 1
Oops, I seem to have posted my review twice .. hmm .. I don't know how that happened lol d:
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: If Love is not Enough Chapter 1
Thanks for PMing me and here I am for the promised review. However, I warn you now that this will be a long and detailed review as I'm trying to ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: If Love is not Enough Chapter 1
Thanks for PMing me and here I am for the promised review. However, I warn you now that this will be a long and detailed review as I'm trying to ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: questions
I can only really answer to number 1, as I'm not too sure about number 2 .. How I always introduce readers to characters is to start off the chapter ...
Oct 25, 2008 -
Re: If Love is not Enough
Heyy there, my name's lucyy & your story caught my eye, so I read it & now wish to review it (: Hope this helps ... Amazing first paragraph your ...
Oct 25, 2008 -
Re: A Titleless Story (4)
fun4eva -- Of course I'm not angry, I'm still pleased you took your time to read and review this, so thank you :D & thank you for your thoughts, I ...
Oct 22, 2008 -
Re: heyzz :) I'm a newbie here! helloo!! :D
Heyy, Elle and welcome to YWS!! I hope you have a great time here - you'll be addicted in no time, I promise you :wink: - and if you have ...
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: How Do You Avoid Writer's Block?
*beams happily* I'm so glad you liked my advice :D & yeah, the ideas box was such a cool idea from Gahks, that I just had to add it in ...
Oct 20, 2008