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Re: Until The End-Part 7
Wohoo *bobs up and down* yipee to another chapter :D Let's read it ... Wow, another great chapter and a brilliant ending! I can't wait for more, you little teaser ...
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Re: Until The End-Part 6
Hm, what did you end it there for?? Post more SOOON, please :roll: I only picked up two spelling mistakes: pasta. I new it knew with me for quiet some ...
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Re: Until The End-Part 5
Ooh, great way to end - on a real note of suspense. Loved it!! However, I found a few mistakes: with magazines, cds, CD's her computers at and computer's her ...
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Re: Until The End-Part 4
The only thing I have to say about this is to be careful with your speech, as it can get confusing as to who's saying what, because of your (unique ...
Oct 30, 2008 -
Re: Until The End-Part 3
Another great part .. I'm really enjoying this!! And the way you've laid out all of your story parts, it makes me go 'oh' in dissapointment, as I don't want ...
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Re: Until The End-Part 2
Wow, another great chapter - there really is no other word I can think of using - you'vce rendered me speachless (: I loved how you described the neighbour's house ...
Oct 30, 2008 -
Re: Until The End-Part 1
Wow, again, this is just ... wow... awesome work!! I love how you've layed this out, so very original, well done you :wink: haha. I love it!! Off to read ...
Oct 30, 2008 -
Re: Until The End ~ Preface
Wow, amazing preface, that left me totally breathless. Your writing's improved so much since I last read it (too long ago, sorry, bad lucyy ;p). Great job!! :D --Lucyy xx
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Re: Untouched Ch 3
Again - I really am lazy & eager, aren't I - I haven't looked at the above reviews, so sorry in advance if anything is repeated ... This is it, ...
Oct 30, 2008 -
Re: Untouched Ch. 2
Can't wait to read the next installment ... :D & I apologise in advance if I've repeated anything already said - I haven't looked at the other reviews, I was ...
Oct 30, 2008 -
Re: Untouched Ch 1
Heyy Jazz!! I don't know if you remember me, but you reviewed one of my stories and I've been wanting to read this story for ages. So, it's half term, ...
Oct 30, 2008 -
Re: Need a review? Well, I love doing them!
Done. Next!!
Oct 30, 2008 -
Re: Vicissitudes--1. Alice
Welcome well and truly to the Romantic Fiction Forum (where I spend most of my time haha :wink: ). Here I am for the promised review and I really hope ...
Oct 30, 2008 -
Re: No Title... A Work in Progress
Heyy there - here I am for the review. I can't wait to get started!! Although, I haven't read the above reviews (I know, lazy ;p ) so I apologise ...
Oct 29, 2008 -
Re: Need a review? Well, I love doing them!
Come on, guys!! Free reviews!! I have nothing better to do. I'm desperate for requests!!
Oct 29, 2008