lucyy

I have just read another awesome chapter, ash - I loved it!! However, I did spot a few things ... Standing to my feet, I knew I Habving 'standing' there ...

Thank you so much for the review, ash. I will sort out what you pointed out, adn just thanks again for reading this!! =D --Lucyy xx

Thank you (: I'm glad you liked it and thanks for reading it!! :D --Lucyy xx

Thank you both soo much, I really can't tell you how much your comments mean to be *beams* so thank you :D I'm glad you're both enjoying the story and ...

Heyy there and welcome to YWS!! I hope you have a great time here, and if you're ever stuck or in need of questions answered, please feel free to PM ...

I wonder if you could review the preface and starting chapter in my new romantic fiction project. I would love truthful, harsh reviews please that will help in my writing ...

** I am no longer using YWS but I'd like to say thank you to everyone who commented on my work and helped me to improve it - you guys ...

Oooooh ... A great starting chapter ashley, and I can't wait for more!! You're such an awesome writer you know, I'm envious of you're writing ability *grr* :wink: hehe :D ...

Thank you very much for reading this, and I shall fix that as soon as!! --Lucyy xx

Here I am for the promised review, sorry it's a bit late (school - enough said :p ) and I hope it helps you out! That's all I can think ...

Just a notice to everyone who read my story (and hopefully new people?? hehe :p ) that this is my final draft which I got A-A* for. Yayy :D I ...

I will get to both of your requests as soon as I can, but I apologise in advance for the delay. I've just got back to school after half term, ...

Chichi -- Thank you soo much!!! I',m so glad you liked it, and also thank you so much for your detaled review - it will come in very handy, so ...

Heyy there SF and welcome to YWS!! I can warn you now that you will be seriously addicted to this site in no time - it's awesome!! :D So, what ...

ashley -- Thank you for finding time to critique this - I can't tell you how much I appreciate it, so thank you.Your critiques always come in handy for me!! ...