lucyy

I'm sorry I didn't read over this yesterday, but I'm back, and willing to do the most best review ever (hopefully)!! =P Now, being me I haven't read the other ...

Please? Just one little review (maybe more than that)?? =P

Heyy there, ash, I'm extra excited to read your new chapter, no matter what you say, so there =P :wink: :D hehe. So, here I go... Through the opaque glass, ...

Thank you so much all of you for your amazing reviews, they will come in so helpful, so thank you very much for taking your time to read and review ...

Thank you all three of you for your amazing reviews - they were just what I needed, so thank you. They will all come in extemely helpful during my editing ...

Done!! More, please? *puppy dog eyes* =D

Here is the second review; I was back quicker than I expected :D “Oh my god.” I whispered. Whatever this thing was, it is now only a monstrosity of nature. ...

Here is the promised review. But two advanced warnings for you: I can be pretty lazy, so I haven't read the reviews above me, so I apologise beforehand if I ...

Now, this is looking a little lonely, so I thought I'd pop by and give you a review (: Just to warn you now, I'm very nit picky (obsessively so ...

Done - next!!!

** I am no longer using YWS but I'd like to say thank you to everyone who commented on my work and helped me to improve it - you guys ...

This seems a little lonely of reviews, so *drum role* =P I'm here to the rescue!! And to make sure your work isn't feeling lonely or unloved :D I hope ...

Heyy there Night Mistress, here is your review, I hope it help you out =D Chapter two We rode the bike at city speed limits. I passed blunt directions to ...

**Moved to the Romantic Fiction Forum.

I have finally found some time to read your most recent chapter!! *dances round the room* =P So, here goes... Some minor Lucy OCD nitpicks: :D mouth falling [s]a-gap[/s] agape ...