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Heyy there kamasgirl, I see everyone has gone through the rules already, so there's really nothing left for me to say except a massive, huge, warm, and cuddly welcome to ...

Heyy there, Em, I am here as requested and this is your second review for this piece!! *high fives* :backtotopic: Anywhooo, back to the serious business, I've enclosed a word ...

Here I am as requested!! (: I haven't read any of the above reviews, so sorry if I repeat anything (: . All my comments/suggestions and edits will be in ...

I have to apologise so much about the delay!! EmmVeePi, My Sunshine, Moriah Lelia and Forever Threndy you're waiting so patiently for me to complete your requests and I really ...

Thank you all for your amazing reviews and critques and thank you sooo much for the time you've taken to look over my work, I can't tell you how much ...

Here I am as requested, I hope this review helps you out, and all my comments/edits will be in bold. I also haven't looked at the other reviews so I ...

Heyy there, I've decided to review your piece as it seems a little lonely at the moment (: . I can see that this is the third chapter so I ...

Maki-Chan, I have done yours (as it was the shortest of the 3 requests) and Moriah Lelia and EmmVeePi I will be posting your reviews hopefully on my next visit!! ...

Here I am as you requested :D, and it seems the first review since you last edited it, so I really hope this helps you out!! (: As always, all ...

I think that you should just simply put that bit in after the title, followed by *** or something like that to break it up from the rest of the ...

Do you have any suggestion on how I could make that clear without writing something like "This is what she said to him"? Sure, I can give you some help, ...

Pleaseeee? *beams hopefully*

Heyy, I'm randomly looking around for pieces of work that haven't been critiqued much, and as this has only one review as of yet, I figured you might want another, ...

I've also taken pride in giving you your first gold star for this piece (just thought you might like to know =P ) :D

Hi there!! This seemed pretty lonely to me, so I'm here to review your piece of work (: You said you wanted people to focus on your grammar etc, which ...