lucyy

As you may have all noticed I have been pretty inactive for ages, since the new YWS started up in fact, for more reasons than I can count and I ...

Wow it took me a while to get back to this didn't it? (: Anyway, here is the second part of the review... =D Philip stood, as if I was ...

Wow! This is an extra bonus :D . You did not tell me this was here though, missy *looks stern* =P. I'm glad to see you're back writing, and I ...

Hi there! First off, welcome to YWS! I hope you're liking it here!! =D Okay, my name is Lucy and I have decided to be your reviewer for today (: ...

Well hi there, I have decided to review this wonderful piece of work of yours!! :D First off I'm going to quote the whole piece and go through it making ...

Hi there and welcome to YWS :D! My name's lucyy and I've decided to be your reviewer for today :D. I hope this review will help you out and if ...

Wow, twenty-one chapters, you’re really sailing through this, eh? :D All I can say is keep them coming :wink: !! Now on with the review... Three others I didn’t. Maybe ...

Well hiya, Ash! :D What better way for me to return home than to have two of your chapters lined up ready to read? And we start off with such ...

Congratulations, guys!! You so deserve it *hugs*!! :D

I was so pleased to see you had another chapter up, so I'm going to cut the post-chat short, and plough straight into the review... (: How could he be ...

Hi there, I have decided to be your reviewer for today :D. I noticed that this was your fourth chapter, so I may ask some stupid questions. if I do, ...

Last Minute Views What you can do to improve: -Add in more thoughts and, especially, feelings. As a reader I’m following this journey of your MC so I want to ...

I have been told to advertise mine and Sunny's (aka 200397) new Online Class in the Lounge, so here I am!! Okay, so Save Energy, Waste Paper is a support ...

Hi there, Max; I have decided to be your reviewer for today!! =D So, first off, I will go through your whole piece making [comments/suggestions] and edits or extra adding-ins ...

If I told Michael, it would send the whole coven into an uproar. Expand a little on that: why would it turn the whole coven into an uproar? How are ...