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Hi! Awww that was very bittersweet. But I kinda feel that it is going to fast, I mean we don't really know much about Jason right now. You did a ...

Hey! So chapters 4 and 5 where very good, but I was wondering if this is a true story? Again, you have very beautiful writing and I enjoy your story ...

Hi! I really enjoyed these three chapters. But I was very curious why he all of a sudden started talking to her after two weeks of not speaking to her. ...

Hi! Wow, that was really amazing. You have an amazing way of writing, you can describe emotion and feelings so well! It was very sad and I am sorry about ...

Hi! Wow! That was really beautiful. I am sure that your uncle would be very proud of you right now. I am very sorry about his loss and yours. I ...

Hi! I really liked it. It was very creative, but I do wish that you made it longer, if your going to spend a 100 points on writing, you might ...

Hi! Wow, that was beautiful! You really showed emotion and creativity in this piece. I wouldn't change a bit of it, it was amazing, perfect and full of emotion! I ...

Hi! Wow, I thought it was absolutely perfect. Don't change a thing about it. You described things very well and you were very creative. I could just imagine her there ...

Hi! I loved it so much, and it was very true! You did a great job and you were very creative. Your rhyming wa pretty good and I hope to ...

Colors This is my own little version of Regina Spektor's The Calculation. colors in water.jpg I went into the kitchen counter got myself another hour and gave half of it ...

Engulfed By My Flames fire girl.jpg I laughed as you were caught in my flames. I laughed because I was tired of your games. You cried out to me in ...

Hey! I loved this! It was very sweet. Wow, it was very bittersweat. I mean the whole death thing was sad and scary(but not in a bad way!) I hope ...

Hi! I really liked this short story! The way you discribed everything was brilliant, especially the woman herself, She was a completely different type of woman than all the pale ...

Hi! I absolutly loved this short story. The name instantly caught my eye and the story fullfilled the amazing title. It was very bittersweat to me, but mostly heartbreaking. You ...

That was soooo beautiful. Hey! I found it very touching and very sweet. I would like to know your inspiration for this! Your writing is very captivating and very creative. ...