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Re: Iced Petals
Hi! I really enjoyed reading this. You did a wonderful job! Your was of writing is very creative and sweet. I thought everything was perfect, including the length. I hope ...
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Re: Clockwork
Hi! I really enjoyed reading this! I thought you did a grand job! I really liked the middle part: Saturday afternoon, and the mail is here sealed with wax in ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: DELETED.
Hi! I absolutly loved your poem. I really liked the mysterious feel you gave off and the rhyming sceme too. This part, I really liked: And this; this is me. ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: A Simple Love Note
Hi! I really enjoyed reading this! I love your way of writing! This was a wonderful story and of course, my favorite part was the end: He realized there was ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 2
The next day, I woke up late. I jumped out of bed, pulled off my pink cami and silver boxers, and changed into the yellow dress that I had just ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: The invisible Piece (Love Poem Beware)
Hi! I really enjoyed your poem, it was very good I just have one thing: The pieces fit together, better than a rhymes. Ackkkkk! It was the first sentance and ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Chapter three
Hey chika! So I think you are doing a great job at writing. I adore your way of writing, it is very creative. I really cannot wait for your next ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Anna and Ryan- their story
Hi! I really enjoyed reading your short story. You have a great way of writing and I adore your creativity. I was just sitting there, biting my nails in the ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: When I Play The Piano
Hi! Wow, that was wonderful! I play the piano, myself. And I love it so much! So title caught my eye immediatly. I love the way you write, very creative ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: A Vision of the Sea
Hi! Wow, that was sooooo beautiful! It was very enjoyable and you have a wonderful way of writing, you are very creative and I love the way you can describe ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Will you cry?
Hi! I really enjoyed this poem, a lot! I have felt that way before, many times to be frank. Here are some of my little comments What if I die? ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: My Crush Ate My Homework
Hi! Its reviewing sunday, yay! So I just wanted to say that I really enjoy your writing. Your very creative and I adore you for that. I hope to read ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare. (edited)
Hi! I loved this short story! You where very creative and I really enjoyed it. I don't care about punctuation and grammer so I wont be reviewing you about that. ...
Jan 28, 2011 -
Re: Into Thin Air - Chapter One (REVISED VERSION AS OF 4/1/11)
Hi! Wow, this is really good! I adore your wonderful way of writing, very creative and beautiful. I cannot wait to read the rest! I really enjoyed it, thanks for ...
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: The Lockets -- Chapter I
Hi Jash! Wow, you have AMAZING writing skillzzzzzz! The detail is wonderful and I can tell that the plot is great! I missed a lot by not reviewing sooner! Your ...
Jan 17, 2011
