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  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Love You, Hate You, Miss You

    Hi! Wow, I really enjoyed reading this! It was so down to Earth and well... true! Thats just how love is! You wanna kill em and right before you do ...

    May 7, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Roses are red...

    Hi! Oh, wow. The poem was very creative and I adore your imagination. The story was brilliant as well, the title hooked me immediatly and that is a very good ...

    May 7, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Alternative Ending to "The Lady or the Tiger?"

    Hi! I really enjoyed reading this! You used a lot of imagination and the story was just creative and simply brilliant. Everything was great, except for the very ending: Thank ...

    May 6, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Piano Man

    Piano Man band-1482.jpg I am your piano man I sing and play but you never stay long enough to hear the end I will hum you the scales that speak ...

    May 5, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: When the Darkness Comes

    Hi! So I am here to review again! I love this poem so very much because it is mysterious and scary, so here are some of my favorite parts: When ...

    May 5, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: If

    Hi! I really enjoyed this poem, it was beautiful and truthful. The length was wonderful and the title was gripping as well as the beginning paragraph. If you can create ...

    May 4, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: How He Promised And How He Lied

    Hi! Wow, I love your writing! I adore your creativity and am so jealous of it! I didn't notice anythign wrong with your grammer and punctuation. I really enjoyed reading ...

    May 4, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Love is Ignorance (Prologue)

    Spoiler Allert! Copyright Info:I hope you really enjoy this new novel but this is a rewrite of a story I have heard- so this is not original I did not ...

    Apr 30, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: The Effect

    Hi! I loved loved loved it! You did an amazing job! You used the perfect amount of detail and the writing was creative and kept me on my toes! I ...

    Apr 11, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Objective of The Game

    Hi! I really enjoyed reading this! I wouldn't change a thing, the writing was creative, fun, and overall amazing! I cannot wait to read the rest, please tell me when ...

    Apr 10, 2011
  • Official Polls Re: What makes you pick up a book?

    I picked the last one. But I would read Gone with the Wind because I know that its a classic, Meg Cabot because her books never fail to intrest me, ...

    Apr 5, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Sweet Lady Jane

    This Short Story is inspired my favorite place in the whole world, Sweet Lady Janes on Melrose in Los Angeles, the best bakery that was right across from my old ...

    Apr 1, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Into Thin Air - Chapter One (REVISED VERSION AS OF 4/1/11)

    Hi! I'm back! So I really really really enjoyed reading this! I liked this one so much and I love the way you write, the vocab and the analogies you ...

    Apr 1, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Fragile

    Hi! this was a creative peice and I really enjoyed reading it! I cannot believe that I am the second person to comment on this amazing story. I love the ...

    Mar 28, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: My Stupid Teenage Essence

    Oh My God You did such an amazing job with this peice. I adored your analogies and especially the ending! I agree with you on everything and loved reading it! ...

    Mar 27, 2011


People say I love you all the time - when they say, ‘take an umbrella, it’s raining,’ or ‘hurry back,’ or even ‘watch out, you’ll break your neck.’ There are hundreds of ways of wording it - you just have to listen for it, my dear.
— John Patrick, The Curious Savage