lovethelifeulive

I adore your writing! Its something new and fresh to read! It was very down to earth and quite good! The title "Sweet sixteen and never been kissed " yeah ...

Hey! I loved this story! What was your inspiration for it? I really enjoyed the first part and all that jazz and the begining of the second part was good, ...

I enjoyed the poem very much and I found it very easy to relate to. I had a laughing fit when I read the last sentance. Adolescence is a fickle ...

I can't believe that I have posted four chapters of Love Story! Oh and there is some mild language and blood and stuff but please enjoy and don't forget to ...

Hey, I must say, that was soooo funny! I am ashamed to say that I loved how you pertrayed Bella to be an idiot. I personally don't care about punctuation ...

I really liked your poem. I understand how as children, we only saw good in the world and dismissed the bad. But now that we can understand pain and anguish ...

OMG that was amazing! ! That was so awesome, but not if that man was really going to eat the girl. In that case I would be slightly frightened but ...

It was absolutly perfect! It stuck a nurve in me and for that reason I am not ashamed to say that I cried. I cried like an emotionally disturbed child. ...

I really loved this. I think that at one point, we have all felt that way about someone else. The way you put it is just the way it really ...

I absolutly ADORE your poem. it was wonderful! Do not listen to anyones corrections, I think that it was absolutly perfect. I found it bittersweat, to me it sounds like ...

So this is the third chapter, please read the first and second chapters to understand more. Please enjoy and don't forget to comment! And here is the link for the ...

Your writing is simply beautiful. It was not to long at all! Do not listen to any negative comments! Of course we get points by our comments, and negative comments ...

Hi, I'm Jasmine. You can spell that any way you want, Jazmine Jasmin Jazzy Jassie Jazzie Jassy Whatever pleases you! So my dear friend told me that she was writing ...

Love Story part 2! Please read the 1st chapter, to understand a little more. Please enjoy. And here is the link to the club-----> -Amber's POV- I stood in my ...

This poem was very sweet, but I do feel like you could have written more, because there are so many ways to describe love. your writing is fabulous! ~JVM