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Re: Just let me be
thanks Doxie00 :)
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: :)
Thanks for the positive feedback :) :)
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Just let me be
Thanks guys for all the positive feedback and constructive criticism :) I have done my best to fix up my mistakes!! :)
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: :)
what do we think? :P -love2read-
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Just let me be
Just let me be I'm short for my age but I try to stand tall When you call me names and make me fell small It’s not fair to me ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Moody Days That End in Y (Poetry Pair Contest)
Great poem When reading it couldn’t stop laughing. It flows nicely. Its realistic and I definitely Can relate to some of the stuff your poem mentioned This was definitely my ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: It's called a lie.
Wow If I had to describe this in one word it would have to be -fantastic- There was so much feeling and emotion I just wanted to keep reading I'm ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: My guardian angel
Hi.... your poem is beautiful There are lots of powerful emotions It flowed nicely and was worded perfectly I also like how you started a new line for were the ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Undone
cool as!!! love it love it love it love it :P i love these types of poems and this one was awesome my Favorite part was the last 5 lines ...
Apr 2, 2011
