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Re: Scream
I cried and he screamed, "Your such a whore" he said to me. "Fat, ugly, stupid bitch" he said and hit my face, I saw my friend and screamed "Run ...
Dec 27, 2009 -
Re: Fire Tears
I forgot to mention at the begining of the poem that this was about my life. Everything happened up until him killing himself. Sad I know, but you kind of ...
Dec 27, 2009 -
Re: Fire Tears
"I hate you" he said to me, my eyes flood with tears 'till I can't see. "I never want to see you again" his voice was flat, I don't talk ...
Dec 26, 2009 -
Re: One Final Time
This poem has such, whats the word, passion I should say. I could feel the pain in that poem. It's like I was there feeling exaclty what you were. Nice ...
Nov 13, 2009 -
Re: Weren't Meant To Be
Wow, I can totaly relate to that. I even understood it really well. It was nicely written and I loved it. Nice job :)
Nov 13, 2009 -
Re: TEARS
Nice job Girli :)
Nov 5, 2009 -
Re: them hearts, what are they?
Yea Kika.. Like we were bothering you that bad. The poem was amazing, I liked how you brought it from both angles and views. Nice job :)
Nov 5, 2009
