love,juliet

First off, I think you left out the W in "sweat" in your first line. :smt002 I really liked this short poem, I easily got the message and understood the ...

I'm pretty sure I can see where you're trying to go , but to me it sounds like the beginning of an essay. I interpret it as "We, as teenagers ...

I took zillion of pics from that first snowfall... here's another of my favorites :) Again, I used a Nikon N65 and snowstar lens filter. It says "Sweet and Fair ...

Hey there! Wow.. you're really really good at rhyming. It seems though, that you just went looking for words that end with an 'eek' or 'ound' sound. Maybe you should ...

I wrote this one a while ago.. looking back I think it might need a little work in terms of the rhyming scheme. :smt004 She's covered in filth every day ...

Hey there :elephant: You've got some great dialog going on in this piece--nice job! My personal opinion (which you don't have to acknowledge, of course) is that this story would ...

Sweet and Fair Photography is the name of my blog: :) Thanks for your feedback!

Heya Daniel! :D Okay, so you've got the bones of a by-the-book introduction here: great. Interesting topic sentence that the reader can relate to, while pulling him or her in ...

Ello Kat :) Okay, grammar first. It seems like you're a little addicted to semicolons but don't know how to use them properly. My guess is that you're mixing them ...

Hey :) I think this was a brilliant idea for a poem. Great rhyming scheme as well. I particularly liked the last stanza. However, when you say I dare the ...

Last Sunday was the morning of our first snow.. I got up early and headed outside with my camera :) I used my Nikon N65 with a snowstar lens filter. ...

Forever. Forever started in April, but the weather felt like May. We’re sixteen and we can plan our future and make our promises. We can hold on together until forever ...

Beautiful. To be honest, because I could relate, it made me cry at the end. I most enjoyed the in depth descriptions, particularly the lines "Your voice, soft as a ...

I loved the theme of this. It very much made me think of all those forbidden love stories out there, but from a different point of view. It was quite ...

I like the idea of using the lyrics from the song to break up your stanzas--it made me feel like someone was singing in the backround while I read your ...