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  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: A Vampires Kiss

    Wow! This is a really great start,the punctuation needs editing like others say and there are a few words I personally would change such as "He revealed his fangs, sharp ...

    Dec 6, 2011


Remember when dad's shoulders were the highest place on earth and your mom was your hero? Race issues were about who ran the fastest, war was only a car game. The most pain you felt was when you skinned your knees, and good byes only meant tomorrow? And we couldn't wait to grow up.
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