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That was so cute! I think the cliche topic worked perfectly! I wish I could do something creative like that. I've been trying to work on poetry more lately. This ...

Thanks for the reviews everybody. Grammar is one of my weakest points. But thanks for taking the time to do this!

Written by April Halprin Wayland This is a short novel in poems. The poems are simple, sweet and to the point. However, the emotion and imagery behind these poems is ...

I think this was a wonderful piece. I wish I had the talent to write something like this. The imagery was amazing. I've played piano for about 8 years and ...

It's falling apart. Our friendship. You assume, you accuse. I assume, I accuse. You snap and break. I'm already broken. We can't let our limbs break Like branches. It's going ...

You just said everything I haven't been able to in the past couple of weeks. Lately, I've been in a writing/poetic mood, but whenever I sit down to write just ...

This was soo good. I wish I could write something like this. And you did it in three minutes! It really made me think and it was easy to imagine ...

I actually really liked this. Usually, I wouldn't like something so straightforward, with not much symbolism. But I really, really liked this. I could imagine everything and I felt like ...

Hi! This is great work..the toad on the flower was amazing. Such a great capture especially for such a fickle animal. I bet that took a lot of time! I ...

This is really great work! I really loved how you focused on the flower or main object which caused the background to be a little hazy. That is one of ...

I had to write an extended metaphor for my English class about being a teenager. Constructive criticism is appreciated :) Being a teenager is swinging on a swing. Back and ...