loudnonesense

thoughts clouded my mind like paint from a brush diffusing in clear water clouding it tarnishing it. my veins pulsed my blood rushed i shook, silently but violently like an ...

This was a very nice, cute and simple poem :) I enjoyed reading it and I like how you kept saying how you were feeling. The anticipation of being ready ...

Wow, I thought this was a really great poem. I can't say I can completely relate to it, but I think it was written so well that I almost felt ...

Hey! I found this poem to be really powerful especially because I know what it's like to travel from one country to another, I moved to America when I was ...

Hello! This was great, it was short and simple and I absolutely loved it because it's easy to relate to. I spend most of my time in my own world ...

Faces From The Past I tore them off. Tore them off Mercilessly off the walls. I tore off the faces from the past. They were only haunting memories now. Meaningless. ...

This was just amazing! I got chills reading it! It just gave me a really warm and nice feeling all over. The rhyming scheme was just perfect and it's one ...

Overall, I really liked this. It was powerful and had a lot of emotion in it. I think that you could add a little more length and detail to your ...

This is really a very powerful poem. I love all the descriptive adjectives and imagery. Everything appeals to the sense. picked away at the crimson heads of fresh scabs You ...

This is really good. I love the rhyming scheme and it's simple and to the point. Your writing is very light and easy to read. I used to love poems ...

I love how simple, short, and straight to the point this is. Yet it brings out such a powerful message. It makes me somewhat nostalgic. And I think that's good ...

February. Thirty-something hours since I left Home. My first steps in America. Chicago. O'Hare Airport. 2002. The only words I knew were yes and no Maybe a greeting. I felt ...

This is really good! I really like it especially because I feel like I know exactly what you are going through. I like the way it was written very, very ...

I think this was very emotional. The pain and emotion was just dancing in between the lines of your poems. Your point was clear, having someone leave you behind or ...

I absolutely loved this! It was very real and it was cute and amusing. Good job! I really like your writing style too :]