lostthought

It is really good. I loved it. There is one thing I saw that didn't look right to me. The line "Little neighborhood kids squish insect though". How did it ...

Since you have no reviews, here I am duh duh dun! I'll try to review your poem. I have no idea if I'm right or not but in "And tell ...

This is the second review for the second story- Blind Justice. Again this story is good. These stories are very realistic. I did not know that Nilan was a slut ...

I'm going to do a review on each story. On the first one- Second Chances, it was really good. It made me wonder if this was real or not. It ...

So your new.... Your next to die (maniac laugh). Joking. Welcome to YWS. This is highly original and I like it. You spelled a few things wrong, but you are ...

I agree with the two below. Like them, I enjoyed the beginning. The Elven Hunters seem interesting enough, but they need more detail so they can be pictured much more ...

Sounds like someone needs an exorcism. What grabbed my arm and dragged me to read this was the title. It just tells you that this is a mystery. Unlike some ...

I seen a lot of spelling and grammatical mistakes. I will point out a few to you. ''We put all our stuffs in the car."- Stuff is already plural. Instead ...

Time for review. There are some things that I saw that were wrong. I would say them, but they have been already said by someone else. You are mainly having ...