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Hi lime! I'm here to review your poem. Well I saw no spelling mistakes. That is good since spelling is a common nitpick in all poems. I saw that the ...

Ok then. That was different and unexpected and at the same time expected. Well I'm here to review. This is great. I saw no grammatical or punctuation mistakes. The spelling ...

Hey there Oss, I am here to review this poem. It is long and that makes it easier to review. ~A young man fighting for a young girls dream.~ In ...

Hi there Veni, I am here to review. I was expecting something else. I don't remember exactly what paradox is but this was completely unexpected. I read it and was ...

Hi lu! I am here to review your deadly terrifying story. I simply love horror stories and that obtained my approval. I didn't see anything wrong for your grammar (thank ...

Hi Okra! (I gave you a nickname :3) I am here to review your poem. It is pretty good. No grammatical mistakes and no capitalization mistakes. I did spot a ...

Well I have read this exclusive article about your review on Catching Fire. I personally haven't watch it yet so I am wondering what they have left out of this ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! I am here to review your work. I was rather reluctant on reading it because I am not very good at reading 'How to' writings. ...

Woowwww, I am here to review. I like things about the afterlife but this is seriously lacking on details. I guess I am going to revert my reviewing way again. ...

Hi there! Oooo suspense. Well I am your reviewer today. Let me give you your tour of the review. First stop- the gun fight. Although it happened at the end, ...

Hi there! I am here to review! I read your first chapter but didn't review it. Right now I want to get to everyone in the green room. The pieces ...

Hi fort, I'll be your reviewer that will happily kick you out of the green room. I would have never had guess that it was a father saying good-bye to ...

Dun DUN DUN! And lights out. That is what I call suspense. That ghost girl was strangely solid. Solid and horrifying. I hope I never see her in my life. ...

Bravo! Bravo! Bravo! (Had to say it. Isn't that what you say after awesome plays?) This must have taken forever to write! I sure hope it wasn't a true story ...

Welcome to YWS! This is great for your first story. I can tell that you spent precious time thinking about this and piecing it together. It was sad, scary, and ...