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lostinmymetaphor

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Arya Poisonhold

    Introducing myself every time gets redundant, so... I'm just going to start. I'm really interested in where this is going. A romance between Arthur and Ayra? Battles? Blood? Gore? (Ewww. ...

    Oct 28, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Runaway (Chapter1.2)

    Hey. :) I'm Kylie... and, well, you know why I'm here. >.< I read the first part after everyone else had reviewed and I didn't really want to sound redundant, ...

    Oct 28, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: UPDATE: Timestone Realities P2

    I have to agree. Wow. You wrote "continued" at the bottom, are you going to continue? (Please please please please do!) Just one question: I was a little confused on ...

    Oct 27, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A Whispered Secret - Chatper 1 *Arrival*

    Hi! I'm Kylie (aka lostinmymetaphor) and here is my wonderful (sorta) review! My English teacher's favorite quote is "show, not tell". And I think you were doing a bit too ...

    Oct 23, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Chapter 1 the truth

    well, hi... I guess I'll get right to it as well. I'm also a newbie, and soon I'll know how it feels to get my first works critiqued. First of ...

    Oct 16, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: MPCPD, The Lab of Universes - 1

    Well, I am just a newbie, but you know, I can help. I think, anyway. ;) I have a couple of questions, but they might be answered in the next ...

    Oct 15, 2009


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