lost-my-mind

I really liked this. it had good flow for the most. It was very interesting and I think you got the emotions of the kids almost perfect and it made ...

very well done. I am afraid to say that this touched my inner evil and had me giggling. I liked this a lot. The only bad thing I found about ...

I really did like this it is good to hear someones thoughts as they go about their day and how ever much we hate to admit it everyone Else's lives ...

Elizabeth smiled as she poured over the documents for the next kill. She would be monitoring Sora's progress making sure he didn't put a foot wrong. This was her element. ...

I really do like where this is going but, yes there is a but, I think you ended it too quickly. The ending is the most important piece in a ...

thanks everyone for the great feed back I am still writing it and after I have finished I will rewrite the first bit because you guys are right but at ...

you cannot have a good poll if you don't included Pat....What is the world coming to!? *goes and hides from the non Pat poll* such a creul poll... Vive la ...

This was a poem written in a strange, suicidal mood so I am not sure of it's meaning but interpret it how you like :D Death's Colours She lay motionless ...

She sat staring into the mirror in her make shift dressing room with a slight amused expression. It's almost a challenge to act sad. Oh but then again I do ...

Character name: Elizabeth Jennens Age: 22 Gender: Female Role: Perpetrator Country: New Zealand General info: Elizabeth is born and raised in a small, quiet town, where nothing really happens. She ...

I like the biscut

“So how is your day been?” “It’s been okay, I guess. Everything just sucks now that I have had to move and I can’t touch you.” “I know how you ...

The hills sparkled with the lift rain that drizzled down. She stood in the center of it all, He hair was the wind, whisking around her childlike face. She began ...

The hills sparkled with the lift rain that drizzled down. She stood in the center of it all, He hair was the wind, whisking around her childlike face. She began ...

Dreams Goodnight my friends I bid you adieu Let your dreams caress your mind The only thing to set you apart, From the others that roam hopelessly Do not let ...