lost-my-mind

this is very touching. It is cute and sad. I think this is very unique and I think she should submit it definitely. I’d sit at his kitchen table, sticky ...

awwww this made me awww XD it is a very touching and sweet poem and I love it so much that therefore I cannot say anything mean about it and ...

first off I am delighted to say you have an enormous amount of talent but a lot of it is raw but with practice it will blossom. There is nothing ...

I did like this but the flow to me seemed a bit choppy, like for a bit it it had a good flow then it changed to not having one ...

I like this but you need to work on structure. It is all jumbled together leaving it with little to no flow and via is right it is more story ...

This is a rather depressing poem but thankfully I like it! I really enjoyed the truth to it and it really made me think well done. Pets are shown lavished ...

I don't like the first two stanza's they are over repetitive, if you changed it so every second line int the first two stanza's said 'his' then it would make ...

I really like this it has the beginnings of a really good poem but Stockmar is right you do need to fix the last stanza. But other than that I ...

This is some ramblings of my brain, so it is a bit all over the place sorry My mind all spinning Too scared to speak. I walk the halls of ...

very god imagery my dear girl. loved it well and truly I am waiting for some more so hurry up silly girl XD some bits need some editing but otherwise ...

full of emotion and terrific! well done. made me want to cause some damage to that person fictional or not...that's hard to do so well done I'd love to see ...

LOVE LOVE LOVE it! this was really well done and practically perfect and oh so touching. My dear penguie you did show all those people that poems definitely do not ...

it doesn't flow at all but you know this but it has potential if you took time and went over it and fixed it up a little then you could ...

nothing was really appealing in the first picture but loved the second picture although the sister seemed to be floating XD maybe she is magic XD loved the costumes and ...

very well drawn I am envious of your ability to draw humans. Unfortunately it seems like your girl is going bald and her left arm is lost. I must admit ...