lost-my-mind

Hay this is really good. I agree with Snoik's way of setting it out. It is a lot easier to read that way. Also I like the way you make ...

I definitely prefer the 'After' one as it is the basis of the 'Before' but it is better. I really like your ideas in this poem and it causes one ...

Polyhymnia She wanted to see her father badly and soon forgot about the festival as she ran towards the house where her father was. As they got into the house ...

Polyhymnia Father was coming here? She pondered the thought it has been such a long time since she has seen father. She missed him dearly. She stared silently as her ...

Polyhymnia "He is more then good." she finally managed to say She blushed a bright red as he mentioned him, she did not know his name but it was obviously ...

Sorry! I must not have read it properly sorry! I changed it though

Polyhymnia She was upset that she was stopped from reading her book, but the festival wasn't such a bad idea. Her sister was very pushy and dragged her along until ...

"Hello?" came the voice on the other end. It was a female one, not one she had encountered by anyone in the group. "Who is this?" she demanded "uh Gabrielle... ...

She had given me a fright that Terpsichore, She was one of her favourite sisters and she had such a grace about her that many envied. "So what brings you ...

This is really well done. It flows very well and the imagery is beautiful done. It's very insightful and has a good ending that leaves the reader satisfied

These were really well written and had powerful emotions behind them that came through beautifully. Just a point, if you broke them up with spaces it would make it easier ...

Polyhymnia She loved the quiet murmur of the woods as she walked through them to find her favourite reading spot. It was the perfect escape from the noise of her ...

She flashed him another smile as they drank together. He was playing hard to get but she knew he would eventually be hers. Her hand brushed over his thigh as ...

She sat across the room staring at him. Her unforgettable blue eyes roamed his body. He was quite good looking for someone who she was going to kill. Her eyes ...

Name: Polyhymnia Gender:female Symbol: Muse of: the sacred hymn, eloquence and dance Personality: she is pensive and thoughtful. Often depicted with a finger to her lips. she is a serious ...