lordgluzman

Man: What did you see in your house? Little Girl: A man in a dark hood. Man: Please tell the viewers that are watching the news, how do you feel? ...

The rhyming was really good, the rhythm was very cool and the message of this song. The only thing I did not really like was: need some rest From all ...

*clap *clap (: I have to say the lyric sounded pretty cool, but the problem was that you had no theme in this lyric, no plot, and no explanation. It ...

Hey I really liked this song but in order to make it very emotional or sad you need to add some more blood to it, for example: The loser cries--------Maybe ...

Liberate my life!!! X 4 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Got to save myself From my wallet From my goddamn gun! I am kicking my self in pain Let’s buy some more cocaine! ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ ...

Thanks guys, sorry I havent been on for more then 4 months beacuse of school and vacation.

Your dark might! Glowing in the black light! All stuck in your head. Your imagination is going wild. I only want to be, Want to be, I only want to ...

Cool! I really loved the humour! Especially the way you made the setting and you put in the characters. I think the best is Jack Sparrow saying `Where is the ...

This song was okay. But I think you used the word cell to much, so in time it pretty much got boring. I think you also don't have to write ...

Yea thanks I did some of the corrections but I really want to leave the last part because I was kind of hoping for a little drum solo in that ...

To tell you the truth I really liked the descriptions and I thought this is a good lyric, but I did not get what you were singing about to be ...

You can describe it more, describe harder the emotions, and you can in one moment of the song even change the rhythm.

IT IS TOO SHORT FOR ME. YOU NEED TO MAKE IT LONGER AND MAKE A POINT OF A POEM, THERE IS NO POINT. YOU ARE JUST TELLING ABOUT FIRE FIGHTING ...

The dark still has light, It gives us a reason to fight, Make hell go deeper then it was, With the sound of our guitars! Make all your enemies bare! ...

I WOULD GIVE YOU 5 OUT OF 5 STARS FOR THIS. REALLY I WOULD, I AM USUALLY HARD ON LYRICS, BUT YOU WERE GREAT! I LIKE THE THEME, IDEA, DESCRIPTION, ...