lordgluzman

This gotta be awsome. I cant wait to read the story. But where are the other chapters?

The reason why I wrote this poem it is that I want to know why do we have to die even when people beg THE LORD to save their loved ...

Your songs are getting sexyer and sexyer. I liked evrything but I think it is more like a poem maybe you should move it to another catogary. But is one ...

It burns like hell! My soul starts to dwell... This feeling starts to make die! That Anger... It opens the door to the devil! I loose my mind... I feel ...

The song it self was pretty good. The rythem was good infact I can play it on my bass guiter and drums.But I didnt rerally get the point of it ...

Great...I really liked it.

I couldnt stop laughing. It was funny. Awsome job!!!!!!!!!!

It has been a huge number of years You thought through this, that I had no ears -You cried! -you lied -wolf too many times I need to hue between ...

My words treed me apart Pain came to my heart My tongue went beyond time My respect declined It went beyond time Memories stayed behind I just wanted to be ...

Thankyou for all the comments guys. I am still trying to improve my writeing.

So many pity lives Being shot and stabbed by knifes Shouts and screams in the battle lines But I mostly hear the explosions of mines Sad to hear that lots ...

:!: So many pity lives Being shot and stabbed by knifes Shouts and screams in the battle lines But I mostly hear the explosions of mines Sad to hear that ...

not bad