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Re: What do I do with you? (Rap and Rock)
I remember. You helped me to write this poem. Thank you dude I even like it a little bit more.
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: My Romance with the Sky
I liked this poem. A lot. But I think you are living in the pre-historic age. People wouldn't think you are crazy if you were building something to fly. It ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: My Romance with the Sky
This is a cute little poem, I like the way it is written. However some of the rhymes are forced. This is my best example: When I was just a ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: The Birth of the WAR AGE
who were the orks again? I thought they were inventions made by the "Brainy Boys." :roll:
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: The Birth of the WAR AGE
Can you please comment on my story. I worked really hard on it, but I don't think its really good. This story is about a game called War Hammer 40000 ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: My heart is breaking apart
That was really painfull,but good. And slowly, am being forgotten You should put an I after the comma.
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: I Am Like A Roadway
I really liked the peace.Your song or poem brings moral.But it is to short even though I have a short poem I still like long songs and poems. I dont ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: The music
I really enjoyed you song.That was the true meaning of music. That could even become a song its self.If you play on an instrument make a melody for this poem. ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: A weird world
really nice,sweet and cute,But to fast if it was a little bit longer I would have given it a star. The words were beautiful you should have to explain more ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: GEE'S
Offensive and stupid. Even for rap, this had no point, the rhymes were forced, and it was generally bad. You need to post 2 reviews now, which you should've done ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: My Romance with the Sky
When I was just a boy I had a vague dream To fly and touch the white cream sky Go even higher and high When I was just a teen ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: Don't Forget
I really liked it. This song remindes me of who I am. It actually work out really well as a rock song. I think you should maybe ryhme more. Sorry ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: Short Poem: Head Man's Hill
the ryhmeing is good but the poem is to short realy short. Dont forget that you need mor explanations.
Oct 4, 2008 -
Re: GEE'S
Ya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that's my friend. You are back on track king awesome you real mother raper.Even though I listen to heavy but still this was real great s@i%. But their were ...
Oct 4, 2008 -
Re: Reaper Chapter 1
That was great. I didnt exactly fined any grammer problems but were are the other chapters? dont give up man.
Oct 4, 2008