lordgluzman

The Devil is in The House Ha ha ha Hello my dear sinner Haven’t you notice that your eyes are getting dimmer? Who have you killed tonight? You’re not really ...

Ow my Lord. THAT WAS AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!! I dont know how to correct you. Your song just hit the spot. I could even sing this out loud if I wanted to. ...

How about food companies that make healthy food? In Finland you guys have KC super market. In America we have Kroger,Publix,Whole Foods, and a lot more

I shall stay I shall pray That the devil wouldn’t come for you May all the sins Fade away The devil will be shocked by the ray I shall stay ...

I agree with my friend Vlad. You could actually make this rap for a heavy beat. Your song is really teachible and rite, but I know that politics and companies ...

I actually really liked it, but why is it called Deep love? I liked the ryhme but I didny really get what was it about love or crime. I understand ...

ok I will change some stuff, but come on guys I want to have some of my stuff in it too. Besides its my story. I want the charecters to ...

Dude, is this a variation on the Warhammer 40k scene? Because if it is, it's pretty far gone. Firstly, the Orks were around for ages before humans arrived - they ...

:o wow.... That is a mighty dragon. I take drawing lessons but I cant draw that well. You are hired to make me a book cover that I wrote. :smt041 ...

Really suscefull poem. But I could even sing. If I could Id make a melody for it, but the problem was it was to short because if you had not ...

It was hell of a song. It was awesome. I could sing it in my head, it also teaches morals. I not gonna write you the mistakes you did because ...

It was really good,but it was too short I HATE SHORT POEMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! they drive me nuts. If you put all the lines together and you wonet put that much space ...

really beutiful words but what does freestyle means? I dont know really, but it doesnt matter. The negative part of this was that it is to short I am not ...

The poem was grate, teaches morals. It is happy peace. But their was a problem I am like a roadway Going every which way you ryhme only once. If you ...

Really liked this story. Your descriptions were so good that I could imagine this all. I know I have to tell you what you should improve but I don't know ...