lordgluzman

ye I kinda agree with her. I play the bass guitar and drums. But this website is for writeing.

I liked it. But you need to make your poetry to be longer. Then I will really like it and give you a ster. But dont be sad. I still ...

Mmmmm. Terrible, terrible. This is what people call "emo" poetry. It's nonesense really. It's just words that rhyme--and I bet you right now millions of people all over the world ...

Can you please comment on my story. I worked really hard on it, but I don't think its really good. This story is about a game called War Hammer 40000 ...

This got to be awsome! I cant wait to read. But I hope you wonet give up on this story like you did on the grim reaper. Good Luck

Dude that was really short WHY DO YOU PEOPLE WRITE SHORT STORYS AND POEMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DAMN IT. WHEN WILL EVER LEARN WRITERS???????????????????????????? sorry..... Anzius you should stop

what are the punctuation problems?

I dont know how to change it to fan-fiction

Really well written (you have a good imagination of heaven) I hope heaven will be like that when I die. I didn't really fined any grammar mestakes. I think you ...

I am sorry but I didn't really like it. Your song was not unusual. Things what you wrote I usually hear everyday on the radio or read it on this ...

I am a boy, but I understand thats what a fallen in love girl wants or dreams. This would be a great song. But one problem /////////////////////////////////// I've been waiting ...

What should I put?

pretty interesting and good luck with. I Havent done reading it (really long story) But who else is helping you. Is it Ollie? Can you tell maybe I still remember ...

I don't know, I like it but some rhyming parts were forced. Once across the street I slow It doesn't really makes sense to me. I also didn't get what ...

I really liked the poem. If you want to move it to lyrics, but then make it longer. Your poem teaches moral as well. Thats what I like about poems. ...