lordgluzman

Never give up

That was pretty funny but I think the reason why people comment your songs bad it's because of the dirty language. But I still like your songs. I am just ...

The ending of the last chapter: “No! No. I don’t want any more lies.” I mad a deep breath “I love.” All of a sudden I felt her lips touch ...

This is my favorite of all!

Ok. That was so funny. I loved it! Exept I dont like the fact tha jakes was down loading porn latly. Haha You see Jakes never watch porn never! Because ...

Awsome dude how did you send your jokes on this website? I want to do that too! Great job. This joke made me happy!

I thought it was pretty good rap song. But you should make it longer. But to be quit honest I thought you did write it in a hurry. Come on ...

The ending of the last chapter: When I was just about to grab the neddler, my eyes widened up as they cached a huge foot stepping on the grunts weapon ...

The Hard Stand This story is basted on a story and game called Halo. I decided to write a story from a point of view of a marine. The time ...

I didn't really get some parts. Your descriptions and the point of the story was great. But I didnt really get the begging and th ending. Try to make it ...

I did a lot what you said and thankyou.

It was really nice and good. The words and the rhyming were awsome! I dont know if you have grammer mestakes but I couldnt fined them. Just to give you ...

You should make it longer. Edit it. You are 15 years old you shouldn't be that lazy. I mean, I am 13 and I am writeing more then 10 page ...

your story-poem was cool. I really liked the point and the rhyme but what was the The head man's hill? You need to be more specific in that case.

That was interesting, I really liked it it was educational too. Now I finally know what is Buddhism. What grade did you get on this at your school? I didn't ...