lordgluzman

Super Good. I could even sing it as a rock song. No grammer mestakes. All your rhymes were good. Thumbs Up! Your poem was long, Very Good! You had feelings ...

Name: Robert Per: 5 Date: 10/22/2008 This story was written by me and my friends Dosden, Megan and Katty[ THE HALLOWEEN GAME On the night of Halloween we go to ...

The ending of the last chapter “Will! Will Tex is over here!” Matt shouted. I closed my eyes for a moment, then I walked were she was praying, her lips ...

I’ll miss you if you go away, The grace you leave behind, Your words were songs of serenity. Every step you take steals you further away. I am left alone, ...

That is a really smart poem. It seam’s to me you write the best poems out of all my friends and other people that I have read their poems. I ...

It's ok, But I don't know what should I then put insted of: Maybe you did kill I guess you will have to pay the devil a bill

really good, It had beautiful words. But I didn't like the last paragraph. Because first you are saying "What a great season" Then you are saying "But my poem sucks" ...

Crime Grows The devil rides at night The people live in fright As the women cry The children get shot and die The heroin is injected You are officially infected ...

Hi, lordgluzman said it right. I agree with him. Your songs are filthy. That's certainly no way to get respect in life. Your songs focus on things that last in ...

THis was so funny dude. I couldnt stop laughing. I hope you got a 100% on it. But their was one problem I didn't understand what the troll was talking ...

Really good! I am going to try to play this on my bass. Your song is really touching. I understand how is it like when you are being kicked around ...

This poem is written to a woman She is a really lovely human She is my grandma the sweet The person that never gives me the negative heat She makes ...

never give up

That was really really touching. In fact I had a little melody in my head for this poem. But I am a rhyming person! But who cares as long the ...

I really liked it it was good,sad I could feel the sadness! But their was one problem it was too short. The longer you write poems the more interesting it ...