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Re: Cry of The fallen swords
Name:Lord Robert Race: Wood Elf Nation: Wood Elves Class: Commander of the wood elves Wargear: chain armor Appearance: Blond hair Personality:Trust worthy Background: Natuer
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: Can’t Take the Pain (Punk Rock)
Can’t Take the Pain I liked you I thought you joined my friend crew But you listened to your other friends My heart bends! It hurts in there But you ...
Nov 12, 2008 -
Re: Save the rainforest!
WOW! pretty unique. Usually people don't right about this stuff. I don't really know if this is a poem or a Go Green Comercial. But if you really take this ...
Nov 12, 2008 -
Re: Iris
This is really good. The adjectives are really well picked. But I didn't really get what is it about. If you can mail me and answer.
Nov 12, 2008 -
Re: The World is a Liar.
Really good. But I think that the world lies partly. (Don't be angry it is just what I think) Still you used really good words! Great job. I liked it!
Nov 12, 2008 -
Re: The Hard Stand Chapter3
The ending of the last chapter: “No! No. I don’t want any more lies.” I mad a deep breath “I love.” All of a sudden I felt her lips touch ...
Nov 11, 2008 -
Re: Rage the day
Not bad my freind, but it is just the begging! It is really cool but too short. I am a typ of guy that likes long poems and lyrics!
Nov 10, 2008 -
Re: A couple more of my poems.
Great poems espacially the second one. It was funny but I didn't fined any cursing in your poem. Good Job!
Nov 9, 2008 -
Re: Poem of the Prisoner
Poem of the Prisoner As I lay in a cage I heart is beating with rage I still have the shame Who am I to blame "I heart is beating ...
Nov 8, 2008 -
Re: Poem of the Prisoner
Poem of the Prisoner As I lay in a cage my heart is beating with rage I still have the shame Who am I to blame... When we were kids ...
Nov 8, 2008 -
Re: what would YOU do?
I imagine me singing this and my friend lord Anzius playing on the guitar! It was like Rock. Your descriptions are really good. No grammar mistakes. Really touching but really ...
Nov 8, 2008 -
Re: One to believe in
It was pretty good but too short. If you would have made it longer and explain more about the beliefs I would really like it.
Nov 4, 2008 -
Re: Halo: The Fight Worth Fighting
Super cool! Awesome action. Their is no grammar mistakes. Really descriptive. I totally disagree with Griffinkeeper. In fact I would like to say that every person has a rite to ...
Oct 31, 2008 -
Re: Star Wars: Republic Commando
Really Good and interesting. But I didn't understand the part where the two teams were training. Did they fire real bullets or what? If you can please reply back and ...
Oct 31, 2008 -
Re: The Halloween Game
Name: Robert Per: 5 Date: 10/22/2008 THE HALLOWEEN GAME On the night of Halloween we go to Game Stop the video gaming store and buy this game called Stay Alive! ...
Oct 30, 2008
